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Shakespeare's (Edward de Vere's) models for his characters



Geoffrey Hamilton

November 26, 1996

How does Shakespeare build his characters? It turns out by modeling them on people he knew. The dramatic techniques, of foil, rhetoric, structure, and action all make more sense once the historical models are discovered and outlined. As you will see Hotspur is made Hal's foil for contemporary reasons, Polonius' rhetoric is meant to ridicule a famous personage, and even plot structures are biographical and mimic contemporary events.

The play Hamlet is often used as an authoritative text to study the nature of art and of drama in particular. The character Hamlet has two famous passages touching on drama. The first states, "The players. . . are the abstracts and brief chronicles of the time". The other gives a complementary purpose, ". . . to hold, as 'twere, the mirror up to nature; to show virtue her own feature, scorn her own image . . . ."

If the question as to how Shakespeare built his characters is going to be addressed, I think it is fair to use these two precepts as his artistic foundation. What the precepts suggest is the possibility that actual people and events are chronicled and mirrored within some aspects of the plays. I will show that such was the case. By using his contemporaries as models he engender a humanity onto his sources.

To demonstrate the wide recognition precepts similar to Shakespeare's were held in his own age, there is the famous circumstance surrounding the rebellion of Essex and Shakespeare's friend, Southhampton. These two Earls believed that staging the play Richard II would demonstrate these precepts so well that it would help overthrow the Queen. During their trial it was stated that the reason why they had it performed was to awaken the London populous against the Queen. Elizabeth responded to this aspect of the coup attempt by saying, "I am Richard the Second; know ye not that?" This circumstance shows how easily parallels were drawn between stage characters and important personages in the period.

However, whereas in this case the parallel is incidental, in many of Shakespeare's plays the parallels are intentional and serve both as a model for the writer, and as a model for the audience to help them imagine the characters more fully.

There are at least five sources Shakespeare drew from: history, the classics, contemporary works, folk tales and, most importantly, contemporary life. Why most importantly? Because despite his genius, Shakespeare demonstrates a common propensity to use 'mechanicals' (as Puck calls them). This is done for the simple reason, outlined by screenwriter Robert Benton, who said, "Unless I'm careful I will find myself writing characters that are general rather than specific. That is, they never rise above the needs of the plot....." Drawing characters and stories from general sources heightens the danger of them remaining abstractions.

A writer gets around this problem with a simple and common solution. As Benton says, "What I try to do most often is find somebody that I know, or have known, as a model for my character. If you take somebody that you know fairly well, you're bound to have certain insights into them". Several plays by 'Shakespeare' demonstrate how drawing from life has served to make the prefabricated "abstracts" consist of a more rounded nature.

There are many examples. Regarding the history plays, Henrys IV and V, several anachronistic additions were made to the first version, The Famous Victories of Henry V , and to the three later Folio versions, and these offer clues as to whom may have been the models.

In the first version a slew of contemporary (Shakespeare's) Earls were flattered as name-sakes in the service of the historic Henry IV, including the 1585 Ninth Northumberland, Henry Percy. The second versions of the story were written after this contemporary Percy's father; the previous Northumberland, died a traitor and Percy himself was suspected of treason. Given how Hotspur is made decades younger then he was historically, and in line with the contemporary Percy, the seemingly coerced foiling of Hal and Hotspur can be explained as convenient and dramatically advantageous. Hotspur's treason therefore is given the illumination of a man in Shakespeare's day.

The Boar's Head Tavern in Eastcheap is well known to have existed only within the author's period, but what is little realized is the currency of the robbery to the time of the play's authorship. An incident of 1573 reflects the same basic circumstances and also accounts for the fabrications within the many versions of the play. While a robbery is accorded to Prince Hal, the fabricated location and date are nearly identical with a 1573 robbery. It was during the fourteenth year of the Queen's reign on May 21st that Lord Oxford, considered a prince of the realm, and three of his men were reported to have robbed the Lord Treasurer's gold at Gad's Hill. Exchange Henry IV for Elizabeth, Hal for Oxford, and may 20 for may 21, (the date is most likely a disagreement) and it is the same event as fabricated for the plays. Finally there was no fourteenth year in Henry IV's reign, a further anachronism pointing to Elizabeth's era .

Incidentally in the Famous Victories it is Oxford who is flattered the most out of the contemporary nobles listed by the inclusion of his ancestor in the un-historic role of savior to Henry IV. As Elizabeth's Oxford was a famous martial spirit who was noted by that same Lord Treasurer for his lewd friends and tavern nights, his exploits are like Hal's and could well have served as the whole model to round out Hal's character.

While the story of the The Merchant of Venice seems to come from a 1579 play called The Jew , the illumination of this play's characters is once again possible by the insights of contemporary events.

In 1577 Martin Frobisher proposed a north-west expedition to look for gold on Baffin Island, all the notables of the period contributed money. Oxford again figures in this tale, as it was he who staked the largest investment, 3000 pounds. The source of his stake was a Jewish banker named Lok. When the expedition failed Lok was accused by Frobisher of cheating Oxford by knowing in advance how the expedition would turn out. Lok lost his 3000 loan to Oxford and was thrown into Fleet Prison . The 'shyster' Lok became Shylock, London became Venice, the pounds ducats, and Oxford became Antonio. Given the great scandal the incident caused, it most likely served the purpose of offering insight into the various characters concerned.

The play Hamlet is not only the longest of Shakespeare's plays it is the most famous -- most likely for it's great portrayal of character. Although it is based on a 12th century Latin history of Amleth of Denmark, the play dramatizes important personages of the Elizabethan age, and none is more clearly characterized than William Cecil, the Lord Treasurer, mentioned formerly in relation to Oxford/Hal's highway robbery.

For nearly half a century William Cecil was the most powerful minister at court. He went from commoner to Baron in his lifetime and became one of the richest men in England. He is widely seen as the model for Polonius, but how far that jibe went is rarely noticed. Cecil, in his lifetime, was called Pondus and Polus, after the pole by which the heavens rotated. In the first quarto of Hamlet Polonius is called Corambis which is Latin for two-hearted; Cecil's actual motto was Latin for "one heart, one way". Such an insult forced the change to 'Polonius' by the time of the second quarto.

The most frequently used proof that Polonius is Polus is the character mimicry in Hamlet . The long winded Polonius and his 'lack of art' is offered and it mirror's Cecil's writing perfectly -- but on the less windy side of ridicule.

Here is a small sample of Polus' writing, "But your Majesty may think my suit will be very long where I am so long ere I begin it; and truly, most gracious sovereign lady, it is true that the nature of my cause is such as I have no pleasure to enter into it, but rather seek means to shut it up for them to lay it open, not for lack of the soundness thereof on my part, but for the wickedness of others . . . ." This typifies his writing and it makes a rich source of insights into Polonius' character.

But there is much more ridicule that finds its way into Hamlet . Charlton Ogburn point's out the other tie-ins. Hamlet calls Polonius a fishmonger as it was Cecil who passed a bill in Parliament to make Wednesdays as well as Fridays meatless; this in order to promote the fisheries. It was called 'Cecil's Fast'.

Hamlet describes the dead Polonius as at a convocation of politic worms. The passage ridicules Polus' frequent reference to being born during the Diet of Worms where Luther defended his doctrines.

The famous precepts which Polonius gives to his son Laertes are parallel to those Cecil published for own son Robert and also told to his wards of court -- Oxford being chief amongst those wards. So it is to Oxford that I turn again.

Oxford as the model for Hamlet is far from the conventional understanding of the character, unlike Cecil for Polonius. However the relationship Hamlet has is very similar to that which Oxford bore and he could very well have offered the depth which is found in Hamlet's characterization. A reading of the play in it's entirety is the only way to prove it, as, it is the relationships between the characters that demonstrates how deeply the parallels go; and it is where the play differs from the Latin Amleth where this is clearest, so each of these parallels is at variance to Amleth.

Oxford was not only acquainted with Polus, he was a ward and, later, a son-in-law at twenty-two: this by his marriage to Polus' fourteen year old daughter Anne. Anne, like Ophelia, was always under Polus' control, she was considered very diminutive and intelligent and Anne was mistreated by Oxford, in a manner similar to Ophilia by Hamlet. This was so until her death when Oxford made his regrets known. The mistreatment of Anne by Oxford is referred to by Mary Queen of Scots in a letter to Elizabeth.

Claudius parallels Earl of Leicester. It's true Leicester could never marry the Queen as he was believed to have poisoned an earlier wife for the opportunity. However Leicester acted much like a co-regent for twenty years. Leicester took over most of Oxford's lands as his own and was suspected of murdering Oxford's father-like mentor Sussex. Oxford and Leicester where constant and deadly enemies. Oxford was of high rank and might have married Elizabeth after Leicester's death if she had felt that she could have controlled him, and if he had not been close to so many 'lewd friends', as Polus called them. She called Oxford her Turk, while others (Gabriel Harvey) called him that singularly odd man.

Gertrude is both Elizabeth and Oxford's mother. Gertrude married within two months and so did Oxford's mother. Elizabeth frustrated Oxford's ambition to be co-regent and to name their son as heir. Gertrude serves similar frustrated desserts to Hamlet by supporting Claudius as the new king. Other models are found in Polus' two sons robert and thomas for Laertes, in Oxford's cousin Horace for Horatio, and in many others.

As the flattery of Famous Victories towards Oxford extends into Henry VI Pt.3 and Richard III it has been assumed that Shakespeare knew Oxford well and was patronized by him. Presumably, he knew Oxford well enough to know his life and how to use it as a model for Hamlet.

It might be argued that the mixing of two characters into one skews the parallels, as with Gertrude being paralleled to both Elizabeth and Oxford's mother. However, this is also a common practice with writers. Robert Benton says, "I use people over and over -- using different aspects of them". This experience of writers is common practice.

But to continue with the parallels, it is Hamlet who very much resembles the model which Oxford supplies. In addition to the examples supplied above there are these. Like Hamlet, Oxford had to contend with Polus' spies. He even killed someone who was most likely a spy, as in the 'rat' scene. He contended with such spies all his life. Like Hamlet he was captured by pirates, but not once, but twice.

In reference to the North-West expeditions, Oxford too was also, "...mad north-north-west: when the wind is southerly..." he knew a hawk from a handsaw . Even the famous soliloquy, "To be or not to be..." is remodeled from a book which Oxford was instrumental in bringing into print. Cardanus Comforte was translated for and discovered by Oxford, 'commanded' into print and paid for, and he also added a supporting preface of his own. To pin down the reference from another angle, the book asked of by Polonius, the one referred to by Hamlet as written by a satirical rogue, is Cardanus Comforte again. This is demonstrated by the play's reference to a passage called "Old men's company unpleasant". Oxford, like Hamlet, patronized the players and had several companies of player and various theatres of his own, and he was quite capable of setting down some lines: he was called the best for comedy by Meres in 1598. Such was the model which Oxford and others represented to Shakespeare for the play Hamlet . With such models rich opportunities for discovering insights would have been available.

With this overwhelming proof, and more in reserve, it seems likely that Shakespeare used models which his age afforded and he grafted them on to the bare bones of other's stories. This is how Shakespeare built characters. Given this, it is not surprising that the specifics of these actual people offered insightful material for the bringing to life of the characters, their rhetoric and their actions. Possibly this is the reason why today they remain some of Shakespeare's, and the world's, most famous and compelling characters.

GRH

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